tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841494515596907182.post4642135675327432612..comments2023-07-18T07:20:20.201-04:00Comments on More Than Just Cartoons: 1st Entry: Drawn TogetherMr. Leo Mahagahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15252974751615373637noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841494515596907182.post-37497556762784862332009-05-01T08:43:00.000-04:002009-05-01T08:43:00.000-04:00When a group a cartoon character live in a house w...When a group a cartoon character live in a house with video cameras everywhere, you know things are going to get crazy; and crazy it does. Drawn Together is a very sharp.I downloaded <A HREF="http://kingofthehill.edogo.com/" REL="nofollow">King of the hill Tv Show</A> last week and watching it.Devidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493766126599626247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841494515596907182.post-38968781983527466682008-10-06T03:18:00.000-04:002008-10-06T03:18:00.000-04:00Hi jessie..The show, Drawn Together Episodes, is a...Hi jessie..The show, <A HREF="http://drawntogether.edogo.com/" REL="nofollow">Drawn Together Episodes</A>, is a mock-reality show featuring typical cartoon characters such as the superhero and the princess. The show throws character from a variety of child-aimed animated genres into one house (very much like The Real World or Big Brother) and allows them to act without the normal censors of a child’s cartoon.michealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09802841268612528797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5841494515596907182.post-40067550641892328142007-03-25T13:41:00.000-04:002007-03-25T13:41:00.000-04:00Leo- you chose a very interesting TV show to analy...Leo- you chose a very interesting TV show to analyze for this blog post. I'm not familiar with it; however, the satirical qualities that you point out are very important and you articulate this genre early in the post, and do so quite clearly. The summary/description of the show is hard to follow, it looks as if you'll be analyzing the characters' personas in order to show the confrontation of gender norms in this show; however the names (whoa!) of the characters, in conjunction with the length of the summary makes it hard for me, as the reader, to follow.<BR/>Your choice of sources to cite was great (articles, are put in quotes, books are underlined or italicized), episodes use quotes too, where as TV show series titles are underlined or italicized), but the formatting needs to be adjusted and the sentence before the one with the citation, should probably begin a new paragraph.<BR/>The links between the show and this reading are very relevant--It's just hard to figure out what connections you're making as you make them based on the structure of the post. By breaking down the paragraphs and citing direct quotes from the reading, I think you'll have a much clearer body of work for your readers. Overall, you've made a great attempt at the first assignment and it brings up interesting issues in this satirical piece of TV. Make sure you tackle the subject in the intro and make a specific argument that you can provide evidence for its support throughout the writing (helping to avoid the over-abundance of episode recap and the analysis getting buried well beyond the first 2 paragraphs of the piece). You're definitely on the right track in terms of your ideas!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00882202558089495129noreply@blogger.com